Cherry blossoms unfold.
Light reveals damp shadows.
Water rests on leaf tops.
Light shines on my face
slamming cabinets awake me
my blankets roll off.
Tree tops meet the clouds.
Roots reach down into the earth.
But this pebble just sits.
Even if your embarrassed, this is good! The vocab that is used seemed to make sense, and it fits.
ReplyDeleteGood Poem :)
i like the one about waking up
ReplyDeleteI really like the nature one because I like the part where it says how the pebble just sits while other things are going on.....
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